[Kharon]

First read through and until I have a chance to really read it; least said, soonest mended.  First reads should IMO always be done while pretending to be a low level filter in a series of filters before anything like Eureka gets to a ministers table, boiled down to a one page summary.  By trying to ‘see’ it as those opposed would and looking for the parts which can and will be used to discredit the document is the only way to edit the piece.  

There are some specious, dubious parts with horse and cart sized holes which will be where the rot starts.  I will, dutifully read the thing between now and Sunday, but it’s not a task I look forward to.

MTF?  Have to be, I suppose....